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Betiyaan toh sirf Ek Ehsaas hai :)

Beautiful lines for daughters; written by great Indian artist Mr. Shailesh Lodha (arey apne Tarak Mehta sahab !!). Daughter or no daughter. Read it. You might just fall in love with the idea of having a daughter.

Kya likhun ?…
Ki woh pariyon ka roop hoti hai…
Ya kadakti thand mein suhaani dhoop hoti hai…

Wo hoti hai udaasi ke har marz ki dawa ki tarah…
Ya os mein sheetal hawa ki tarah…
Woh chidiyon ki chehchahahat hai,
Ya ke nishchal khilkilahat hai…

Woh aangan mein faila ujaala hai..
Ya mere gusse pe laga taala hai…
Woh pahad ki choti pe suraj ki kiran hai…
Ya zindagi sahi jeene ka aacharan hai…

Hai woh takat jo chote se ghar ko mahal bana de…
Hai woh kaafiya jo kisi gazal ko mukkamal kar de…
Kya likhun ??…
Woh akshar jo na ho toh varn maala adhoori hai…
Woh, jo sabse zaada zaroori hai…

Ye nahi kahoonga ki woh har waqt saath saath hoti hai,
Betiyaan toh sirf ek ehsaas hoti hain :)

Uski aankhein, naa mujhse gudiya maangti hai na khilone,

kab aaoge, bass ek chota sa sawaal suno naa…
Apni majboori ko chupate huye deta hoon main jawaab
Taareekh batao, time batao… apni ungliyon pe karne lagti hai woh hisaab
Aur jab main nahi de pata sahi sahi jawaab…
Apne aansuon ko chupane ke liye
Chehre pe rakh leti hai kitaab

Woh mujhse australia mein chuttiyaan, mercedes to drive,
5 star mein dinner ya mehenge Ipods nahi mangti…
Na woh dher se paise piggy bank mein udhelna chahti hai
Woh bas kuch der mere saath khelna chahti hai…

Aur main kehta hoon yehi…
ki beta bahut kaam hai.. nahi karunga toh kaise chalega…
Majboori bhare duniya daari ke jawaab dene lagta hoon…

Aur woh jhuta hi sahi,
Mujhe ehsaas dilati hai..
Ki jaise sab kuch samajh gayi ho..
Lekin aankhein band kar ke roti hai…
Jaise sapne mein khelte hue mere saath soti hai..

Zindagi na jaane kyun itni ulajh jaati hai…
Aur hum samajhte hain, betiyaan sab samajh jaati hain.. :)

And, here is the video as recited my the poet himself !

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32 comments on “Betiyaan toh sirf Ek Ehsaas hai :)

  1. It’s a beautiful poem …

    I would strongly suggest you to give due credit to “Mr. Shailesh Lodha” for the wonderful composition.

    • Hi @nks…

      I did not know the author of the poem.. just came across these lines in a video… If it’s Mr Shailesh Lodha then a big thanks to him… I think I have mentioned in my blog that I am not the author of this poem…

      Thanks :)

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  3. It is Really a very Touching Lines……it bring tears in my eyes…..

  4. i just read this blog today…and co incidently ..i m shailesh lodha…i dont know who has put it but i was googling somethin and found this on this blog…anyways i must tell u this poem was written on a flight back from aurangabad to mumbai and on a tissue paper it was written,..when i wrote it i thought i would not recite it in my shows but when i did it once and saw the responce of the people, i changed my decision and thought this is poetry should be recited everywhere..and i m doing it….anyways thanx

    • amazing poetry Lodha ji..what a coincidence..i was in one room and the TV was on in the other room..u were reciting this poem on some comedy show..i just heard the lines from the other room and googled “wo kaafiya jo ghazal ko mukammal kar de” and came across this. Wishing a really speedy recovery to ur daughter…and wish u all the best

    • Sir I am fan of yours not because of your role in “TARAK MEHTA KA ULTA CHASMA” but because I know you from the Serial on SAB TV “WAH WAH” as a comperer.Also, I watched you in Comedy Circus & Comedy ka MahaMukabla.If U do get to read this message send me mail at vimal150677@rediffmail.com
      ABOVE ALL A GOOD POEM ON BETIYAN : EK EHSAAS

  5. Hi

    I just saw todays BT n there is one column about Shailesh Lodha in Times Sqaure, as i and my family which includes my hubby n my 4 yr old son is a big fan of Tarak Mehta aka Shailesh Lodha. So thought to read the poem, i m really touched whoever is the author, i am very very thanx to them to wright such a nice poem on betiyan. Really touched…..

    Thanx

  6. very touching poem by Shaileshbhai Lodha…..and also my family great fans for Tarak Mehta……

  7. Realy a heart touching poem Thanks to Shailesh ji…….. I have also feelings for my douhgter now i found very true words to express……

  8. Aapki is anmol kirti ko maine apne man mastisk me basaa liya hai. Ye kewal ek kawita nahi balki ek sandesh hai unke liye jo janam to ek aurat se lete hain magar betiyon se ghrina karte hain. Thanks again to realise that.

  9. bahut acha likha hai apne shailesh ji mene yeh poem jab b sunta hu mujhe rona ata hai really hates off 2u

  10. it is very beautiful to poem thank you very much to mr. salesh lodha

  11. hi,
    This is Anuj. I like to thank shailesh bhai to give us such a lovely thoughts like “wo aangan me faila ujjala……” Ya phir “wo mere sath kuch der……”

    Ya is hakikat ka sach shayad jo shailesh bhai ne mahsoos kiya BETIYAN TO EK EHSAAS HOTI HAI.

    Thanks for every single word of this beautiful creation Shailesh bhai Lodha.

  12. Beautifully expressed TRUE sentiments. DAUGHTERS WILL ALWAYS TRY TO KEEP THEIR PARENTS HAPPY EVEN IF THEY MAY NOT BE. I CAN SAY OUT OF MY EXPERIENCE WHAT SALESHJI HAS WRITTEN IS A REALITY THAT IS WHY I SAY HAPPIER ARE THOSE WHO HAVE DAUGHTERS.

  13. Beautifully expressed. Saleshji has depicted reality. Daughters always give peace and happiness to parents even though the may not be. I say”Happier are those who have daughters”

  14. Awesome..!!! Truly touching lines. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. :)

  15. no words … absolutely made me cry and did remain spellbound for sometime… i never knew that this guy can be or capable of so nice emotion… dont know the reason but it always seem to me that girls are always nearer to there father as compares to boys … anyways thanks for sharing the lines and if anybody intersted in listening from the person itself then here is the link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JHWXYdLIwYQ

    thanks thanks again for sharing arunima
    have a great day ahead

  16. amazing poetry…
    jo padhenga uske aankhonme aansu jarur aayenge …
    It is Really a very Touching Lines…
    thanx a lot

  17. M inspired

  18. M really speechless….I hv no wrds 2 xpress ma feelings. I was a gr8 fan of Mr.Lodha due 2 hs acting in taraak mehta ka ooltah chashmah bt nw aftr reading dis poem n watching it’s video on youtube I thnk in ma prsnl view I hv became d gr8st n biggst fan of dis man.
    A vry spl thnx 2 u arunima 4 writing dis on ur blog.
    Arunima I hv a rqst 2 u….plz if u kindly prvide me wid the names of ol 4 buks written by Mr.Shailesh Lodha to my mail id bcz it’s vry much difficult 2 find the names of buks in google….I’ll b vry thnkful 2 u if u do dis.

  19. very good thoughts

  20. I love it. You just wrote with lot of amazing feelings. I am just step in blog world.

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  21. ek baat sach kahun…mera antar mann ro pada ..ye pad ke….sachayee yahi hai ki sita mata ne bhi agni parikshaa di thi to aaj bhi kyun us aag me jal rahi hai betiyaaan????????bolo

  22. Excelllent poem by Shailesh Ji, I love this poem a lot an thnks for posting it here. i have a daughter she is 2yrs 8 months old and love here a l ot

    you can see her pics in facebook by searching for my name by writing my email address her name is vedantika an my email address is vikas_sonu@yahoo.com

  23. nice one ! uncle …..

  24. sir ji, is poem ko padte padte mere aankho mey paani bhar aaya, jub mey yeh poem read ker reha tha too mari beti ka chera mari aankho k saamney aa geya tha sir aap ki yeh poem bahut bahut great hai sir

  25. No words to say. Truly awesome……

  26. Hi :)

    This is the poem I wanted for my assessment….
    Thanks a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

  27. a grand salute to you sir

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